What we had is still there ,
you will stay forever inside
safely guided to my heart.
Having you made my world shine,
closed the curtains of sorrow.
It’s not just from the old past,
it’s a deeply hidden dream
that pointed you out with a beam.
Leaving you made a deep wound
that scattered my soul
tortured my heart.
I can hear your whispers,
I can feel your breath,
you are buried in me.
Heavy tears passed by
giving me back a soul to cry
but memories are still alive
giving me hope before they die.
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That's much better it's much clearer. I'm glad you fixed some of the gramatical errors. I really really like the last stanza it's heart wrenching. I'm so glad you ended with those lines about memory they were my favorite, from the original poem.
ReplyDeletethanx omar.glad you liked it.:)
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